Oh my!!! That was no bitter plum he tasted!! More please!
Sauntering Soul
· 1 year ago
Okay, I'm hooked! I want to hear the rest of your story.
Lil Mouse
· 1 year ago
wow. interesting... more next week?
Karmyn R
· 1 year ago
Heck - forget the movie, when is the book coming out? This is my idea of a perfect Bathtub read.
MizSassy
· 1 year ago
WOW! I agree, forget the movie! Publish that book! You got me hooked too! I'm ready for Chapter 2!
janet
· 1 year ago
wow!!! when does the next chapter come out??
i'm hooked. thanks for playing, maria!
Kristyn
· 1 year ago
Very nice! You could make this a weekly soap opera over here, I'm pretty sure you'd have an audience! ;)
Tara R.
· 1 year ago
You are a dirty, dirty girl... and definitely the one who should be writing screenplays. Next time!
Kimmylyn
· 1 year ago
Bravo.. this easily captured me.. I hope you continue this story.. :)
PS. Mr. Lady is HOT. Love her.
sybil law
· 1 year ago
OOh I picked a good day to stop by, didn't I?! That was wonderful! I especially liked the plum part. Poor Joaquin! :)
Mr Lady
· 1 year ago
My kids are all sick, so I will read this later, but, um, seriously?
I AM SO GLAD YOU GOT THE HTML RIGHT.
I know you will do it up propa. I am so excited to read your scandelous little notes~!
Honeybell
· 1 year ago
Fantastic! Can I have Joaquin when Maria is finished with him?
Groovy Mom
· 1 year ago
I'm hooked!
Mama Zen
· 1 year ago
Now this is the kind of Indecision I would like to be dealing with!
Kathryn
· 1 year ago
Holy shit! I am impressed! What a writer! I love it. Must have more!
Irish Coffeehouse
· 1 year ago
WOW! Very nice! I love it!
Thanks for sharing (and taking the time to type all of that!!!!!).
Maggie
· 1 year ago
More more more!!!
Tiggerlane
· 1 year ago
Wow....best Fun Monday script I've read yet! Not to mention the hot men picked as the actors.
You are quite a writer, girl!
anglophilefootballfanatic
· 1 year ago
Your leading men are yummy. And, your inclusion of both James Joyce & Ayn Rand? SO very you. I am always enamored of literary women.
Jod{i}
· 1 year ago
yanno...I happen to know this chick who can hook you up with some screenwriting formats and stuff *wink... More please...Excellent! Nice writing lady! You got it goin' on! And I have to admit every character has pieces of me and of course the lead is me...'cept I happen to change hair color and skin color and mannerisms..Truly I am a better guy lol!
Deb
· 1 year ago
Flawless casting, darling. I'm captive... tell me more!
I'm also very jealous of your nifty HTML toy!!
Jenni
· 1 year ago
You know, a man who knows books doesn't even need to work out!
But it sure doesn't hurt.
Mamalang
· 1 year ago
Very interesting...more?
Mariposa
· 1 year ago
Interesting...nice view/read! I want more! ;)
Smart A$$ Mom
· 1 year ago
OH.MY.GAWD.
You are good. And tell me why it took so long to figure out how to get to your AMAZING page?!
Thanks for all your bloggy love.
Karen MEG
· 1 year ago
Omigod,omigod,omigod...you are good girl. PERFECT casting... I love both those J's. Hawtness...can't wait for the next installment!
I love the new look too. You've been a busy, busy gal!
Caffeine Court
· 1 year ago
I can't wait for the part when Joaquin throws Jill from Caffeine Court on the floor and ravishes her!!
dKaye.com
· 1 year ago
ooh la-la! mon cherie ... more! more!
Kate
· 1 year ago
More, please! (ASAP)
Amy
· 1 year ago
Oh. My. Hell. Can I please play the part of Jonathan's jilted lover that he leaves with a mercy fuck before he shacks up with you? Please? That man is just pure heaven!
Huckdoll
· 1 year ago
I love Joaquin! I can't believe you cheated on him!!
If you guys get divorced, send him my way. Rawr.
Great post!!
carrie
· 1 year ago
I'd cast myself if those men were in my movie too!
You're a great writer!
Jennifer @ The Cubicle's Backp
· 1 year ago
What a life you lead! However will you choose?
Kori
· 1 year ago
Oaky, I just really liked the hovering over the links bit. that was pretty cool!
suchsimplepleasures
· 1 year ago
hey...that was awesome...when is the next chapter? xoxo
Stacey @Real World Mom
· 1 year ago
Damn, Woman! You are GOOD!!
LaskiGal
· 1 year ago
OK--as an English teacher . . . I love reading stuff that is good . . . you got some good stuff! I'm thinking write the book and then option those movie rights!
April
· 1 year ago
Screw the movie - write the book, woman!
CamiKaos
· 1 year ago
i love html secrets
Laurie Kendrick
· 1 year ago
Brilliant writing..I expect NOTHING less.
LK
holly
· 1 year ago
love love the html stuff.
love the screenplay. and i *so* didn't see that coming : you playing yourself. that came out of nowhere! just you make sure you get PAID.
Avery Gray
· 1 year ago
Before I say anything else, I wanted to tell you I love the new look! Awesome!
And the story? Amazing! Quite the hook at the end.
So, are you planning on writing a book? Because I will be first in line to buy that sucker! Seriously.
You have a way with words.
Kelly
· 1 year ago
Holy Shit, Ayn Rand? James Joyce? Who wouldn't have wanted to jump the man's bones after shit like that. I'm wet just sitting here thinking about having a conversation like that. No, truly beautiful. Really.
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@momo fali - *lol* No, it wasn't!
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@Sauntering soul - LOL. There is no rest of it!
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@karmyn r - LOL. I dunno...
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@mizsassy - That was like chapter...4!!
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@kristyn - That's a good idea! I'm just reallllyyy shy about my creative writing. LOL
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@mrlady - Thank ya, thank ya. I owe you big!!
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@mz - wouldn't we all? *lol*
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@kathryn - Thanks. :)
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@maggie - Aww geez! I can't refuse you!!!
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@AFF - I just like books. LOL :)
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@jod{i} - I wish you would! :)
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@jenni - I KNOW!! He's my perfect guy!
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@mariposa - Thank you!
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@smart a$$ - LOL. It's okay!
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@DK - Geez.. Dont' twist my arm. :p
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@huckdoll - I just might!!
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@TCB - LOLOLOL. Maybe I won't!
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@stacey - Thank you! :)
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@april - I dunno how good my romance scenes would be!
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@camikaos - Me too. :)
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@avery gray - AAWWWW!!!! My Avery review!! :) I'm so happy you liked it!
LunaNik
· 1 year ago
I was enthralled and so interested that I was even able to tune out the whining of my own children...
I want more!
Please tell me you'll be adding to the story every week?????
The Immoral Matriarch
· 1 year ago
@lunanik - I'm considering it, but I don't know...
Judith Shakespeare
· 1 year ago
Dude, STEP AWAY FROM THE JONATHAN.
Seriously, while it is most definitely a supremely awesome and amazingly written fantasy, I'd seriously have to kill you over it.
(of course, we'll have to go get drinks first...)
loveyh
· 1 year ago
Wow, excellent!
Can I have Joachin when you're done with him, pretty please? :)
Tiffany
· 1 year ago
*sigh* You really are a great writer. And what a fucking fantastic cast! LOL
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i'm hooked. thanks for playing, maria!
PS. Mr. Lady is HOT. Love her.
That was wonderful! I especially liked the plum part.
Poor Joaquin! :)
I AM SO GLAD YOU GOT THE HTML RIGHT.
I know you will do it up propa. I am so excited to read your scandelous little notes~!
Thanks for sharing (and taking the time to type all of that!!!!!).
You are quite a writer, girl!
More please...Excellent! Nice writing lady! You got it goin' on!
And I have to admit every character has pieces of me and of course the lead is me...'cept I happen to change hair color and skin color and mannerisms..Truly I am a better guy lol!
I'm also very jealous of your nifty HTML toy!!
But it sure doesn't hurt.
You are good. And tell me why it took so long to figure out how to get to your AMAZING page?!
Thanks for all your bloggy love.
I love the new look too. You've been a busy, busy gal!
Can I please play the part of Jonathan's jilted lover that he leaves with a mercy fuck before he shacks up with you? Please? That man is just pure heaven!
If you guys get divorced, send him my way. Rawr.
Great post!!
You're a great writer!
xoxo
LK
love the screenplay. and i *so* didn't see that coming : you playing yourself. that came out of nowhere! just you make sure you get PAID.
And the story? Amazing! Quite the hook at the end.
So, are you planning on writing a book? Because I will be first in line to buy that sucker! Seriously.
You have a way with words.
No, truly beautiful. Really.
I want more!
Please tell me you'll be adding to the story every week?????
Seriously, while it is most definitely a supremely awesome and amazingly written fantasy, I'd seriously have to kill you over it.
(of course, we'll have to go get drinks first...)
Can I have Joachin when you're done with him, pretty please? :)
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